I Keep My True Love in the Basement/REMIX Cover

So, after many, many, MANY revisions and too much tinkering, I've made a new cover for the extended version of the 26-page one-shot.  I still used the old image because, well, I really like that image.  If, in the off chance I come up with something better before the planned mid-October publication, I'll make a newer cover that will either surpass this one or won't replace it at all.  I coloured the eyes and made it look more dark and brooding.  And for some strange reason I'm really into messing with my word placement and letter styles these days...

Creative criticism is always welcome.